Peer Assessment of Draft version

We had a lesson were classmates got to give feedback on eachothers magazine/film production. From the feedback given by my classmates i believe i recieved a mid/low level 3 which i am reasonaly pleased with, however i am aiming for a 4. My classmates notified me that they liked my idea and the shots i have put together and that it has a lot of potential, so i was happy with that. I still need to add opening credits into the film opening and i also need to introduce some soundtrack/music to go in the film. I havent given any thought about a title for my film yet and will do over the next 24 hours. I have madea draft piece of music, however i wont use it on my piece because i know i can do better. Over the next 2 weeks i will be staying after school to do editing, creating music and improving my film opening.

First Draft Media

That was my First draft media, i have already filmed more and i have more to edit and to add onto my project. I am pleased with how it is going editing wise, however filming has been a little issue because the car i used in my production was infact broken into whilst filming so that took time to fix and look normal again, and also some of the actors have been busy and not been able to be filmed. I am learning a lot through this process.

Editing

How does the editing in 'Transporter 3 Trailer' construct a relationship between the characters

I choose to anaylse this trailer because it is fast paced and includes a huge number of shots and techniques of editing. The pace of the trailer is so fast that i have not been able to count to a correct number of shots, but i have a estimation of about 90 shots within the first minute of the trailer.
Because the film is all about a character who drives a car transporting a character who is also the package, the relationship between both characters is close, as the viewer watching the trailer finds out they cannot go a certain distance from the car else they die.

Their are soo many shots of the car moving, for example a car Point of View shot at 0:55, a low angled shot at 0.53 and a birds eye view of the car at 0.54, as you can tell by the 3 camera shots in 3 seconds it shows that the trailer is fast paced from changing camera shots.